I needed some feedback regarding my work so i could see some further direction of development. I emailed a friend for some feed back by attaching the imagery. This is the Advice i was given.
"Fun recipes for fruit and vegetables" is Kerned to much. Looks cramped. —Try brighten the "Yummy" up a bit brighter orange. Add a slight drop shadow on it too, just to see what it looks like. (Try an opacity of 25% — X and Y both at 1mm and Blur at 1mm always looks great.) Its your choice.
Don't worry about having it 'Fully Justified' sometimes it doesn't work as good as leaving it normal. The text should flow better leaving it 'left' but it will still keep its 'grid'. Don't have the kerning too tight. Again do the same for the logo.
Quite like the 'Old paper'. But overpowers to much. Try dropping Transparency a little. You'll know when Its right. Again (Personally) I dont think it needs to be fully Justified. (Your choice again) I read somewhere that having it fully justified makes it harder to read. Try and get rid of the widows on the end of your paragraphs. I don't particularly like the speech marks on the title. If it is a quote it will look much nicer if you use the typeface you have used for the title. (Just as long as they come with the glyphs.)
Oh and No Hat.
Great images but the Poems are crying out to be on the same angle as the picture goes. (I Think I'm not sure though.) Needs something else. But when your working always think about 'The Grid' Make sure everything aligns up.
Its good to get someone's else view as they can sometimes see what you cant!!
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